Feedback thread gm5

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I think it's the fact that the first hint has 'either' in it I naturally assumed that the suggestions separated with commas was the multiple options the 'either' referred to, as in:

Either step on switches 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9,10,11,12,13...

or step on switches 1,3,5,7,9,11,13

or step on switches 1,4,7,10,13 etc.

or think about it

If that is the case, I would word it something like "Either use every switch, every other switch or every third switch etc." and start the second hint with something akin to "Otherwise you can just think about it..." in order to properly separate the two hints. Otherwise, if the hints are supposed to be connected and the two options are:

Either step on switches 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9,10,11,12,13...

and then step on switches 1,3,5,7,9,11,13

and then step on switches 1,4,7,10,13 etc.

or think about it

I would move the 'or' to the first hint or end it with a semicolon so you know for sure that both hints are part of the same sentence and that the 'either' refers to the second hint.

Oh, and to clarify: I don't think MOROS' CAMPAIGN is mean, it's just tricky and a bit difficult to see how the wires go, as in the room to the right of the exit (is the title an anagram by the way?).