The Creative Writing Thread
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Hey I'll share one. Keep in mind that I'm French. This is called "The Eternal Trial", it's a song I wrote in 2010, and it clocks at over 8 minutes.



The Eternal Trial

It was a summer night with a breathtaking sunset

Your fragile hand got into mine, we watched the scenery

The clouds were dancing in the sky, memories from when we met

We looked at each other with so much bravery

And we are spinning through time

With no more fears in mind

Moments forever spent in search of perfect moments

While we recall somewhere we've been before

Falling into eternity we don't know where we've been sent

As long as we're together forever more

And we are spinning through time

With no more fears in mind

Despite the fact that we're only humans

We're trying to keep up

Our journey to the unknown eternal land

We haven't given up

...An eternal trial...

It was a peaceful summer night to spend with you

Your fragile hand got into mine, we watched the scenery

The spinning clouds above our heads watching our rendez-vous

Suddenly stopped, we knew then that we've found eternity
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